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Post by hantigger on Apr 16, 2004 3:24:45 GMT -5
Crimson Thoughts
That drop of blood oozes down the chalky wall, sap from a gnarled tree into cool air. It rips through my thoughts.
Thorns prick at my soft skin, blood sinks into the carpets weave, as a cherrys inky pigment. Aromas, inflamed by candles, as wine spills in unwilled slumber.
Your bloodshot eyes in white light, come close to my ear, breath reddens my cold skin, lips whisper desires, fire on cool death, forcing blood through forgotten veins. Brambles twist into committed sins, becoming entangled in each others lies. My eyelids close, crimson stains inside. Secrets now only left scratched into woods grain, as leaves tugged just out of grasp. One vivid collision of love, Gone wrong.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 16, 2004 14:34:10 GMT -5
Very nice, I love the imagery and word usage, nice work. Welcome to Poet Club hantigger, it's great to have you with us.
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 16, 2004 14:51:43 GMT -5
Yeah this did have great word usage and imagery, I totally agree. And I also welcome you to Poet Club, it's great to have you here.
Fox
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Post by hantigger on Apr 17, 2004 5:40:36 GMT -5
Thanks for your welcome and comments!
Hannah.
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