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Aroused
Apr 15, 2004 15:04:39 GMT -5
Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 15, 2004 15:04:39 GMT -5
I slipped a rose between your lips And moved my hand across your hips Touching your rear I feel so good For once now I feel understood To make love to woman of your grace It puts me in my place Feeling like the king of the world To have such fun with such a good girl Tell me stories of the things you do And this will be how I remember you When I am all alone Sitting in the bed in my home Wondering where you are, what you are doing And I'll suddenly have my juices stewing As I dream of your again Tell me it's not a sin?
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Aroused
Apr 15, 2004 19:53:48 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Apr 15, 2004 19:53:48 GMT -5
Fox, a new one, great work, I liked this a lot.
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Aroused
Apr 16, 2004 14:35:30 GMT -5
Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 16, 2004 14:35:30 GMT -5
Fox, this is one of your recent best, great work!
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Aroused
May 1, 2004 15:40:02 GMT -5
Post by amberputis on May 1, 2004 15:40:02 GMT -5
incredible...i love the rhyming...amazing write
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Aroused
May 12, 2004 12:27:17 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on May 12, 2004 12:27:17 GMT -5
I like this one Fox, you did well here. Just a thought the poem itself looks like a Queen of a Chess set if you were to give it a touch more to be a bottum. Does thaat make sensr? Either way I liked the poem.
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