A Beautiful Rose

[X x K e l Z x X]

The things we do are beautiful
The way we feel is wonderful
Your breasts touching mine
Passions flowing like wine
My soul is captivated
My heart is elevated
And you keep me coming 'til the break of dawn
I never want to stop, never need to yawn
You just keep singing me your sweet love song
And baby we can go all night long
Just breathe unto me
Just touch and don't let me be
Perhaps no one would accept this
But I know I just don't wanna miss
A second of passion here with you
'Cause your love just soothes me thru and thru
Such a beautiful rose, yes you are
In my sky, you are a shining star
Lighting me up each day and night
And this love we make is out of sight
Don't be afraid, no don't be ashamed
I'm your woman now, so don't be tamed
If no one knows then no one can care
But baby all I need is you right here

[John Barnett]

Wow, Kelz, this is one of your best pieces ever, I really liked this. You mixed romance, suspense, and sensuality all into one, great job!

[::..::FoX::..::]

I agree with John, this is one of your best ever Kelly.

[X x K e l Z x X]

well thank you guys, those are nice words.

[::..::FoX::..::]

You are most certainly welcome Kelly.

[Mikepoet]

The poem was good as always when you write.
What I like most is the visual picture of the way the words are shaped. I see a Rook on a Chess game. I have often tried to draw a picture in the words but never did as well with the perfect symmetry as you have here.
P.S. Rooks are one of the most powerful pieces on the board and I wonder exactly what you were trying to draw.

[amberputis]

I agree, that was an incredible write, I loved the way you expressed youself, and all the comparisons, sky, stars, rose...it was great, wonderful job