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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 6, 2004 15:15:09 GMT -5
Surely an experience you don't want to miss Passions's fire, as a thirst, must be quenched Fantasising...with your deep eyes and sexy grin Touch me and everything is lost again Eyes that sparkle with desire Take my ring, I told her this Of the next hour - I am afire As blood rushes in our veins And I feel the brilliance and softness of you Of Wanting you, the sensual pains This blessed hour atones for all Hold me in your arms forever and cherish me And your lips blush for shame. . Come to me, silent as a dream slips into my mind But you, dear heart, you love me now Joyfully...Caressing...Emotionally breathless.... Seeing you for the first time again Imagine deep, dusky breaths Stay close to me
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 10, 2004 16:06:16 GMT -5
This one has a passionate longing sense to it, great write, keep it up Kelly.
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 14, 2004 15:18:27 GMT -5
Kelly, this does seem to be a passionate experience as you have described it for us, great work.
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on May 1, 2004 15:46:27 GMT -5
nice job, you have such a way with words
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Seth
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Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on May 15, 2004 13:47:48 GMT -5
Truly, passionate and intimate. Simply breathtaking...
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adarnase
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When I fall, I fall hard.
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Post by adarnase on Jan 9, 2005 5:13:05 GMT -5
This poem is beautiful, inspiring and so full of life...
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Jan 11, 2005 20:10:24 GMT -5
Thank you all for the kind words.
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Post by jeffturner on May 14, 2009 6:12:11 GMT -5
Good to read this
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