Erotically Exotic

[X x K e l Z x X]

Exotic
The sun is pouring in my window
I will be forever grateful to the stars above for sending you to me
And the heavens write your glorious name
Your face bloomed like a sweet flower
See us sink deeper
We walk together, we talk together
I am becoming jealous of the sweat that drips down your body
Lithesome thighs pressed close together
A passionate look now in your eyes, I see
Meeting as one...
ah, peace
My awakening has begun
The essence that alone makes this love divine
My mouth waters as it remembers your taste
Lying provocatively in innocence
Erotically...
You soften my heart, love like a rose
Remember, true love's worth waiting for
I'm scared and thrilled by all of this
You are but a young bud among natures greenery
Whispering from afar
To me in my dreams

Because It still feels like

[John Barnett]

Wow again, you are getting very steamy with these, great work. Envelope pushers, your specialty...

[::..::FoX::..::]

This is very erotic, and edgy, good job.

[T.J. Barber]

Simply beautiful. I enjoyed this very much. Your imagery was fantastic. Great Job Kels.

[Fisherman]

Ah, I love this Kelly, you are so talented and so great. Thank you for writing these sexy pieces for us to be teased by.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

wow zephyr, that was hot hot hot! excellent...
x rinna x

[amberputis]

i agree with...everyone. awesome job...i enjoyed this, like many of yours, well done

[Mikepoet]

Another good write by Kelz. Young love is a vision of beauty. Young passion in the minds eye of a poet is most exquisitely written here.