Salty Speech

[SilverEyes]

Tears tracing the curves of my face
As I sit here
Wishing for your embrace
There is this fear
Deep down inside of me
And it makes me cold
That you and I will never be
It's like some part of me's been sold
And that part can never be returned

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This is only worth posting because it's the first piece I've written in months. And I kind of like it too.
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[angel]

well I like it also. I love your opening line and your final line, very strong. Very nicely done

[bloodredtears]

i loved the opening three lines....but i got tripped up on the next one...is it "This is the?" or "What is this?" i'm not sure exactly....other than that the whole thing was quite enjoyable! sure feels great to get over that bump in the road doesn't it!

[SilverEyes]

That's a typo actually. Thanks for noticing it.