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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 24, 2004 21:30:16 GMT -5
Counting heartbeats per minute.
The tip of passion throbs me awake.
Sweet morning pains of pleasure,
rigidity is a delicious ache.
When eyes won't close we fellas know,
as our members increase in size.
The skin has to come from somewhere,
I think it’s the lid of my eyes.
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Post by DarkStar on Mar 27, 2004 12:44:55 GMT -5
That's pretty good... but I'll explain why guys actually wake with boners. Often, if a guy doesn't pee before he does to bed at night, the bladder presses on the prostate gland, giving the effect of what is colloquially known as a "pee boner". Also, the rectum's proximity to the prostate gland has led to the possible misconception that a guy's G-Spot is in his anus. I'm not sure if the Graffenburg spot is actually present in men. Maybe that's why they often can't find it in women, but then again, I wouldn't know too much about that anyway....great piece  |
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Mar 27, 2004 12:50:49 GMT -5
I like this, the title is humorous and it's an interesting theory, great work.
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 27, 2004 13:34:52 GMT -5
Thanks both of you..It's fun to look for the G spot in a woman.. ;D
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Mar 28, 2004 23:47:49 GMT -5
You know, i have to say this is one of my favorite poems here. Its just so different, entertaining and a little humurous as well. I love the different sides we see of you mr. mikepoet...you think and see things from both sides of the mirror...i guess you just seem very real to me. but anyways...well done once again
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 29, 2004 9:00:45 GMT -5
Thats wonderful to wake up to..thank you..I'll be 37 soon..must be feeling my age so I have to post one about my imortality of well you know how we fellas are..
I'm working on one now about counting dead sheep to fall asleep..I'll try to make it funny..Again thank you and am smiling here.. ;D
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 29, 2004 12:46:31 GMT -5
Well, this was quite interesting and entertaining to a certain extent. I found humor in this, but a great write also.
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 29, 2004 14:29:11 GMT -5
;DThank you.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 5:36:44 GMT -5
there's nothing cuter than my man drooling (from the mouth) with a massive fat, completely unaware. it's...endearing. i assume he's thinking of me of course...i liked this mike, funny, as you are... ;D
x rinna x
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Post by Mikepoet on May 1, 2004 22:24:37 GMT -5
I like to make a smile happen. ;DI'm sure your old man is for you when he wakes that way.
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