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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Mar 23, 2004 14:13:52 GMT -5
Strawberries and cream that's my dream for you and me are we on the same page I want to share this berry with you we can chew it together and make it sweeter afterwards I love you so, I want you so So will you give in to the temptation and let me show you a great time Strawberries and cream in your mouth, as well as mine Girl you've brought me to my knees Now can you love me please...
I had decided to avoid posting a lot of my really old poems, but I was inspired to post this poem after I read Mikepoet's "Chocolate Tipping Strawberries". Great job Mike, here is my "sensual strawberries" poem.
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 23, 2004 15:49:29 GMT -5
Since this is yours and I enjoyed it...would you mind if I watched it in my mind?
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Post by Fisherman on Mar 23, 2004 16:45:12 GMT -5
ha ha, I like what you said Mike, great poem, I like this one too!
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Post by amberputis on Mar 23, 2004 19:56:19 GMT -5
lol, guys are too funny...but i thought this had an interesting flow, but was surely well written.
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Mar 23, 2004 20:18:23 GMT -5
Sure, by all means, do as you like...
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Post by John Barnett on Mar 25, 2004 14:59:24 GMT -5
Ah, this is a classic, I remember reading this poem what seems like ages ago now. One of your original best Fox, great job of course.
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Post by SilverEyes on Apr 4, 2004 17:25:09 GMT -5
I like the imagery of this and the almost pleading question of the last line.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 12, 2004 18:56:31 GMT -5
This is a good one Fox
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 13, 2004 18:12:03 GMT -5
I remember this one well. It's a great Fox classinc. An original piece from the Acid Rock Star. Great job my dear friend. This piece was magnificent then and is so still. It brings back very fond memories of the old times we all had together. Thank God for memories huh??
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