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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 22, 2004 19:49:59 GMT -5
Chocolate tipping strawberries, while sipping some champagne. Were watching clouds a gathering, where moisture is contained.
Umbrella and chairs on the beach. Solo couple just her and I. Was the time our loves entwined, merged feather soft inside.
I saw water shimmering raindrops, heard the thunder rolling by. Lightning flash arching energy merge, joined energies of romance this night.
Erotic thoughts did rise, hand held loves bulbs glow. On my knees to Venus I preyed and love bulged to passions flow.
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Post by Fisherman on Mar 22, 2004 20:15:50 GMT -5
dude, this was nice!
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 23, 2004 3:02:46 GMT -5
Thank you sir.. ;D
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Mar 23, 2004 14:11:28 GMT -5
Mike, this was awesome, I loved this, it reminded me of an old, old poem of mine, and I think just because of that, I'll post mine, just for old time's sake.
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 23, 2004 15:47:09 GMT -5
Thank you...on this forumm?... will search...
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Mar 23, 2004 19:58:23 GMT -5
cooool, i like it much!
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 24, 2004 2:06:38 GMT -5
;DSo glad you enjoyed...
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:14:40 GMT -5
Yea I loved this one too, great write Mike
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 2, 2004 13:06:51 GMT -5
Thank you!! It's my birthday!!! Going to a Headbanger gig with some buds playing at a local bar. ;D
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 10, 2004 1:34:39 GMT -5
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh! mikey you make me swoooooooooon with your writing.... i really love this one! x rinna x
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Post by Mikepoet on May 10, 2004 23:52:22 GMT -5
Such a wonderful freind you are!! ;D
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