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Post by Burning Innocence on Mar 19, 2004 19:03:31 GMT -5
Stop, hold your breath, here I come Keep your eyes open Don't miss what I have I won't move too fast I'll take my time You'll see that I'm all you'll ever need Hush...forget everything around you Know that I'm here to change you Keep your eyes on me Focus on what you see It'll all come clear with each move I make Let me set you free with each kiss I give I'll break through the shell you're incased in I'll lick the blood off your wounds Forever you'll stay chained Enslaved for all eternity I'll satisy your every need Don't fight...you'll only make things hard Struggle all you want, I'll only make things better Close your eyes Just feel...enjoy each sensation I give you I'll make your mind explode I'll tear away at your soul you can't escape the things I want to do I'll make you see... I am everything you need
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Mar 19, 2004 21:02:50 GMT -5
ooh i sense a bit of mind control, hehe. but just in showing that women hold power too...good write
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Mar 20, 2004 15:47:28 GMT -5
It is poems like this that make me love this particular board so much, great job!
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 29, 2004 12:47:15 GMT -5
Yes, this was great, very intense.
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Post by Burning Innocence on May 8, 2004 10:31:20 GMT -5
Thanks you guys! It's always fun bein in control once in a while....
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