adarnase
Novice
When I fall, I fall hard.
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Post by adarnase on Jul 20, 2005 9:52:58 GMT -5
The caress of the Valkyria Will echo under my skin for eternity
As her pulsating tongue enters my welcoming mouth My spirits shines like the candles encircling us Her soul whispers me to taste her elixir Beckoning me to ignite her longing
The body of the divine being trembles Like rose petals caught in a wild wind
The longing in her blue eyes A mere mirror of my lust for her
Now I have revered her temple And she rewards with holy of mix pleasure and pain called love
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Post by T.J. Barber on Jul 21, 2005 1:53:08 GMT -5
Very Interesting. I enjoyed reading this. I can't truthfully understand it's message but, it was nice to the eyes. I enjoyed it. Nice flow, I enjoyed it !!!
TJ
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Jul 27, 2005 21:01:54 GMT -5
I love the words here, great piece adarnase.
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Aug 1, 2005 17:27:45 GMT -5
Sensual, riveting and gripping. I agree, I love the words used here, adds a deeper sense to the piece. Wonderfully written.
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