Burning Desires

[X x K e l Z x X]

Let the ice cube melt on my skin
I'm feeling warm within
But a shiver goes down my spine
And the water flows in a crooked line

Sweat is surfacing on both of us
I think it's getting hot in here
Could you breathe down my neck
To cool me off

Can you see the steam
Can you smell the smoke
It's hot in this place
Could you splash some water on my face

Desire is burning inside my soul
As you wet me down, but I'm not cold
I'm hot enough to set you on fire
It's all because of my burning desires

[::..::FoX::..::]

Kelly, this is such an awesome poem from an awesome writer and person, it's great to see you around and to read your work again, wonderful!

Fox

[amberputis]

I liked your use of words, the whole thought behind it too! oh ya...and the visuals are great...well done

[X x K e l Z x X]

Thank you

[SilverEyes]

Great job, I like how you described the fire of desire by contrasting it with the ice cube and water.

[X x K e l Z x X]

Yes, thank you. I think ice can be very sexy when used properly.

[T.J. Barber]

Ahh, I remember this one as well. Just as Fox's poem " Strawberries and Cream" This piece reminds me also of the old time we had together. I'm glad that just some of the band is finally back together. By the way, I love this poem. It goes great with your personality.

[Mikepoet]

Lucky lucky fella!! ;D