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Post by Burning Innocence on Mar 8, 2004 23:38:19 GMT -5
I have cried many tears You taste so good I have screamed out in the night You feel the heat I have tried to push you away You make me want you more each day
Staring into deep blue seas I'm lost under your turbulent trance Caught underneath the spotlight You pull so delicately The grab, the pull against my will I push, I fall, I'm in your arms
Soft, the touch of your nails Scraping lightly against my back The fight, the cries against my soul Wishing I could run away To hide my mistakes To bury into my void
Filling, the hole within Sweat drips, you lick Bites, the marks you leave on my arms I claw, leaving my name for all to see Shatter me to pieces Break my foundation Tear away at my heart
Feed me your soul To make me whole Let this dream never end When I awake, I hope to remain Lost in your trance Our bodies moving against the wave To the point where we are one
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Post by Sathien on Mar 9, 2004 8:55:36 GMT -5
i find this sensually romantic. good job!
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Post by Seth on Mar 11, 2004 12:37:01 GMT -5
Agree with Sathien... Such a sensual and romantic piece. Loved the write.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:16:13 GMT -5
Yes I liked this, it is unique and stands out because of it's diversity from the other pieces in this board. It projects both a romantic side and a more sensually romantic side, well done.
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Post by Burning Innocence on May 8, 2004 10:34:02 GMT -5
Thanks once again you guys! I can't help but say I'm a total romantic...just trying to get all these feelings across....
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