Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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Post by Wolf on Feb 27, 2004 18:29:12 GMT -5
Centipede
...to Amou
Lying side by side,
your fingers a nimble centipede
crawling up
and down
the furrowed fields of my back,
raising quivering meadows of gooseflesh...
Exploring,
crest by crest,
the small hills of my spine;
a bumpy highway leading north
to soft furry forests...
Questing
back and forth,
across the valleys and ridges
of my face and and neck,
gently exploring,
caressing the plateaus of my back,
the ridges of my sides...
I am glad
in your exploration...
One does not find
such an inquisitive centipede
but once...
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, October 12, 1994
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 27, 2004 18:48:43 GMT -5
Hehe, cute write and sweet too.
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Post by Sathien on Feb 29, 2004 12:38:08 GMT -5
love the metaphor. well-written piece. and well, cute too. ;D
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Mar 1, 2004 23:33:28 GMT -5
I enjoyed reading this one, a good write,Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Mar 6, 2004 15:57:13 GMT -5
aww this is so adorable. wonderful descriptions.
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Mar 7, 2004 12:29:58 GMT -5
this is one of those kind of poems that just brings a smile to your face, excellent write  |
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Mar 11, 2004 12:39:06 GMT -5
So lovely, I loved every line... A wonderful piece, definitely brings a smile to your face.
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