First Kiss

shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality.

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First Kiss Feb 23, 2004 19:47:31 GMT -5

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Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 23, 2004 19:47:31 GMT -5

My eyes tightly shut
Our breath mingling, sweet and fresh
Your hands rub my shoulders
Little tingles race down my spine
You lightly cup my face, my cheek
Bringing, luring my lips closer, closer
The first contact of your supple lips
Against mine are enough to drive me
Crazy, crazy
With sensations running through my body

I go weak in the knees
As you move closer, closer
With the heat radiating off of you
Your lips take more, more
Necter from my swollen, bruised lips
I'm weak, I can't move
Frozen in place by your taunting lush lips
The small bites you place upon my lips
Excites me to an extreme

Little moans escape my lips
I can't stop them, I can't stop myself
Allowing your tongue to dance with mine
Your sweet, sweet taste
Brands me forever and eternally

- Lianna
Last one left of our lineage - don't forget us. imaginary goddesses.
"shallowed up in the sound of my screaming
cannot cease for the fear of silent nights
oh how i long for the deep sleep dreaming
the goddess of imaginary light..." - Evanescence

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	First Kiss Feb 23, 2004 22:00:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Feb 23, 2004 22:00:07 GMT -5 hmm...very realastically compared to a first kiss, although not mine, heh, but to many others. well done
	Amber

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	First Kiss Feb 24, 2004 22:23:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 22:23:53 GMT -5 I enjoyed reading this one,good write! ;DJoe

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	First Kiss Feb 25, 2004 15:11:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Feb 25, 2004 15:11:54 GMT -5 i liked the repetition. very nice write. i wish my first kiss was something like this. heh
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	First Kiss Feb 25, 2004 15:17:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 25, 2004 15:17:54 GMT -5 really good poem imagery great enjoyed it very much regards Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	First Kiss Feb 25, 2004 18:16:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 25, 2004 18:16:51 GMT -5 Beautiful write
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

imaginary goddess #5 Novice shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality. Posts: 69	First Kiss Feb 25, 2004 23:34:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 25, 2004 23:34:01 GMT -5 thanks for the comments. much appreciated! muah! Lianna
	- Lianna Last one left of our lineage - don't forget us. imaginary goddesses. "shallowed up in the sound of my screaming cannot cease for the fear of silent nights oh how i long for the deep sleep dreaming the goddess of imaginary light..." - Evanescence

serenepoetress Apprentice Posts: 84	First Kiss Feb 26, 2004 15:54:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by serenepoetress on Feb 26, 2004 15:54:39 GMT -5 I havent though about my first kiss in years. Thank you for reminding me. Your poem made me smile and it was very much enjoyed!
	Copyright 2004 Laura Mae Oldham-Brownell

X x K e l Z x X Chapter Leader Just Me Posts: 1,035	First Kiss Apr 1, 2004 20:16:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:16:47 GMT -5 This was sweet, very sweet.
	~~KelZ~~ Z e p h y r Poet Club Administrative Assistant

imaginary goddess #5 Novice shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality. Posts: 69	First Kiss Apr 4, 2004 21:35:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Apr 4, 2004 21:35:22 GMT -5 thanks
	- Lianna Last one left of our lineage - don't forget us. imaginary goddesses. "shallowed up in the sound of my screaming cannot cease for the fear of silent nights oh how i long for the deep sleep dreaming the goddess of imaginary light..." - Evanescence

Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 23, 2004 19:47:31 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Feb 23, 2004 22:00:07 GMT -5

Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 22:23:53 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Feb 25, 2004 15:11:54 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 25, 2004 15:17:54 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 25, 2004 18:16:51 GMT -5

Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 25, 2004 23:34:01 GMT -5

Post by serenepoetress on Feb 26, 2004 15:54:39 GMT -5

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:16:47 GMT -5

Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Apr 4, 2004 21:35:22 GMT -5