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Seth
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Lasting Love Feb 21, 2004 21:43:05 GMT -5

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Post by Seth on Feb 21, 2004 21:43:05 GMT -5

Wet lips travel south over trembling skin
Sexual energy building inside,
A slick tongue dips in a sensitive navel,
The response was her aroused cry.

She bends down to meet his face
Looking deeply in his eyes,
She could see lust, love and heart
A love forever without lies.

Lips meet and dance softly
Tongues meeting and moving together,
Eyes close and moans pick up
As impatient hands roam one another.

Clothes are thrown and dropped to the floor
More soft flesh is quickly uncovered,
Unclasping her bra, revealing her all
Soon later his manhood is discovered.

He leans in and kisses her once more
Hands freely touch such delicate skin,
Smiles mirror and sweet caresses,
Another night of passion shall begin.

"I see the eternal misery.
I feel the caress of beauty around me.

I dream of the colors in your crystalized
fantasy...
Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Lasting Love Feb 21, 2004 23:40:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 21, 2004 23:40:07 GMT -5 This piece has some wonderful descriptions but is still modest. I like the last stanza best. Wonderful write.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Lasting Love Feb 22, 2004 14:49:52 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Feb 22, 2004 14:49:52 GMT -5 oooh intense! Very nicely written, way to keep up suspense!
	Amber

serenepoetress Apprentice Posts: 84	Lasting Love Feb 22, 2004 21:17:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by serenepoetress on Feb 22, 2004 21:17:03 GMT -5 Intimacy so tastefully described is not an easy undertaking, but you have certainly mastered it within this piece. You have captured the bliss of love without losing it's modesty. VERY WELL DONE!!!
	Copyright 2004 Laura Mae Oldham-Brownell

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	Lasting Love Feb 23, 2004 7:41:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 7:41:17 GMT -5 Great poem, I enjoyed reading it! ;DJoe

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	Lasting Love Feb 23, 2004 15:35:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Feb 23, 2004 15:35:48 GMT -5 incredible descriptions. well done piece. it's very lovely
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

imaginary goddess #5 Novice shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality. Posts: 69	Lasting Love Feb 23, 2004 23:39:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 23, 2004 23:39:46 GMT -5 vivid descriptions (though modest - as mentioned). i liked how you kept the rhyme scheme, but it didnt interfer with the intent of the poem. lovely piece. muchos love <3 - Lianna
	- Lianna Last one left of our lineage - don't forget us. imaginary goddesses. "shallowed up in the sound of my screaming cannot cease for the fear of silent nights oh how i long for the deep sleep dreaming the goddess of imaginary light..." - Evanescence

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Lasting Love Feb 24, 2004 7:43:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 24, 2004 7:43:47 GMT -5 excellent seth, you have poetic talent to spare, great poem. take care Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Lasting Love Feb 26, 2004 22:58:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 26, 2004 22:58:42 GMT -5 beautiful!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Sathien Guest	Lasting Love Feb 29, 2004 13:32:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Sathien on Feb 29, 2004 13:32:38 GMT -5 passionate write. wow, lustful yet sweet at the same time. well done. kudos!

Post by Seth on Feb 21, 2004 21:43:05 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 21, 2004 23:40:07 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Feb 22, 2004 14:49:52 GMT -5

Post by serenepoetress on Feb 22, 2004 21:17:03 GMT -5

Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 7:41:17 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Feb 23, 2004 15:35:48 GMT -5

Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 23, 2004 23:39:46 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 24, 2004 7:43:47 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 26, 2004 22:58:42 GMT -5

Post by Sathien on Feb 29, 2004 13:32:38 GMT -5