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My Blessing Jul 22, 2004 20:40:28 GMT -5

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Post by angel on Jul 22, 2004 20:40:28 GMT -5

I give up-
You win
I started out happy for you-
Until I started-
To fade away
No more me-
A lot more you
You stole my best friend-
From me
And the only thing-
I can do-
Is let you
For if I truly-
Respect-
And care for her-
My only option-
Is to bow down-
Give my blessing-
And eventually move on
Even though my heart-
Slowly starts deteriorating…
My best friend totally oblivious-
For you have blinded her-
And I can do-
Is let you.

7/19/04

Mikepoet Virtuoso Posts: 487	My Blessing Jul 22, 2004 23:59:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mikepoet on Jul 22, 2004 23:59:42 GMT -5 Had that happen before, love is an all consuming creature.

Seth Virtuoso Root Beer Float Play something country! Posts: 411	My Blessing Sept 7, 2004 10:49:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on Sept 7, 2004 10:49:27 GMT -5 Hm, indeed. Love the wording, the emotion and the way this flows.
	"I see the eternal misery. I feel the caress of beauty around me. I dream of the colors in your crystalized fantasy... Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	My Blessing Sept 20, 2004 2:14:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Sept 20, 2004 2:14:18 GMT -5 like mike said, love can be consuming. passion can't be reined in. well done.
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by angel on Jul 22, 2004 20:40:28 GMT -5

Post by Mikepoet on Jul 22, 2004 23:59:42 GMT -5

Post by Seth on Sept 7, 2004 10:49:27 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Sept 20, 2004 2:14:18 GMT -5