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Post by pencinks on Jul 10, 2004 6:01:33 GMT -5
Here nondescript and unobvious,... virgin waste, as a Montague to Capulet where there's no more space for sacred, love blurs their eyes , glareth, hideous. whose passions flour alike and bread they become, whose primal urn consumes them, with an intoxicating wine...
but no...
Likes of whose pity for starcrossed lovers they're neither death nor in pain... mingling thine passions, yes passions that burns them weary, in a pedestal of loneliness, they scream... stealthily silent...gnawing their human...
then the linen drip of vermilion and of musty unison, uncaring for not even hell may care bittersweet innuendos... for them...
More of an untold story of their rowdy introductions...
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Jul 17, 2004 16:38:17 GMT -5
Love the format and how you've worded this. Wonderful write, I love the last two lines, though the whole piece was marvelous.
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Post by Mikepoet on Jul 24, 2004 23:03:47 GMT -5
Well read..rather complicated to me though..was worth the reread to get it.
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