Happenstance

[Alex'z Death Chic]

I don't understand why
I always end up pushing you away
wanting you to go
yet pleading you to stay

but now I've said my last goodbye
to the one who holds my heart
the one who'll always be
in my life, the greatest part

moments have passed
yet I still feel you here
tears have been shed
yet I still want you near

though I've tried to hold on
I just end up not knowing what to do
even how hard I try not to
I always end up hurting you

[TheToker]

whoa man....that one touched me deep, it was a excellent write, and i think i like it so much is cause that is what i do, so i guess you could say that i relate...

[pencinks]

hmmm... the pain i feel at this reverberates...like a recurring headche though, no matter how we try to ignore something, the more it reminds us, maybe then a good *sigh* would help...and a silly grin perhaps...i know it'd suck but hey, it is life's bittersweet ironies, 'know ive had my share...nice piece ADC!

[amelie]

nice flow to this and good rhyming that never once felt forced. very sad theme but i thought it wasnt self potying , which i alwyas like to see. well done love

[Alex'z Death Chic]

TheToker, pencinks, melis... Thank you for your words... I deeply appreciate them... Thank you again