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Post by John Barnett on Apr 9, 2005 14:57:10 GMT -5
Out goes my brain I think I'm insane If not yet then I'm getting there Your touch is like a hot wire It sets me on fire And I'm no longer the same Just one look is all it will take To get to my heart and make it break
chorus: When you are gone So am I 'Cause when you leave That's when I die But when you're here with me I'm not so empty You bring me to life And everything is alright
You say I'm crazy but I'm crazy about you There is nothing that I would not do To keep you here with me To be all we can be Would make me so alive again This fire I know that burns within Your touch is one thing that gives me a boost And you are one thing I don't want to lose
repeat chorus
bridge: You set me on fire, give me desire Passion is flowing as I'm getting higher You make me alive, make me thrive So baby come with me and let's take a dive
repeat chorus
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Post by T.J. Barber on May 11, 2005 21:12:06 GMT -5
I really did enjoy this one. I can tell that this was meant to be a rap song so, it's not quite my taste but, I really did enjoy it's flow and the message behind it. Great Write!!!!
TJ
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Post by Cadre on May 30, 2005 11:00:09 GMT -5
Lovely lyrics, full of passion and emotion. I especially liked the bridge, and the overall word choice.
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