Post by pipes on Mar 8, 2005 23:37:13 GMT -5
(starts vocals with bass drum on 1/4's, nuthing else)
so we've hit another patch
of stormy weather
and i can't do a thing
to make this better
so just listen to my song
cause tommorow i'l be gone
i'm sorry, i'm in love with you forever
(slow instramental section, picks up into still pretty slow, but heavier verse after two quick lines)
we'll pull this together, soon we'll get it right
i'll hold you forever or till the end of the night
rotting in this chemical depression
(can't remember my name)
the drugs in my blood dip into ressecion
(things are never the same)
so i'll lay here holding her
and hurting you and hurting me
and i'll say, "dear, this i'm sure
i'm coming to, and we can't be"
(faster, drums busy, with energy)
it feels like somthings wrong
and im just to far gone
to give a damn, its just not worth it
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
(instramental, main guitar solo, into slow down)
(hi-hat in 1/4's, nuthing else)
i'm breaking down
i'm wearing out
i'm reachign wits end
i'ed do anything for you
(still hi-hat, but snare 1/16's every beat, accent first note each beat, cuts off after first "anything")
i'm breaking down
i'm wearing out
i'm reachign wits end
i'ed do anything (anything)
it feels like somthings wrong
and im just to far gone
to give a damn, its just not worth it
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
("i'll miss you" repeated in backing vocals, "i'll" two counts "miss you" two counts, repeats immediatly)
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
(on word "more" heavy bass/snare/ride cymbol hit, let ride ring but everything else cuts out and vocalist finishes)
despite the subject, want it to be a pretty up beat song as far as the music of it goes, simple, light, quick drum parts, happy chords, happy vocal progressions, not supposed to be a depressing sound.
this is one of my most complete peices, i've got a full drum part, but i can't play guitar (yet, working on that) so i cant write those parts. comments and critisism welcome.
pipes
so we've hit another patch
of stormy weather
and i can't do a thing
to make this better
so just listen to my song
cause tommorow i'l be gone
i'm sorry, i'm in love with you forever
(slow instramental section, picks up into still pretty slow, but heavier verse after two quick lines)
we'll pull this together, soon we'll get it right
i'll hold you forever or till the end of the night
rotting in this chemical depression
(can't remember my name)
the drugs in my blood dip into ressecion
(things are never the same)
so i'll lay here holding her
and hurting you and hurting me
and i'll say, "dear, this i'm sure
i'm coming to, and we can't be"
(faster, drums busy, with energy)
it feels like somthings wrong
and im just to far gone
to give a damn, its just not worth it
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
(instramental, main guitar solo, into slow down)
(hi-hat in 1/4's, nuthing else)
i'm breaking down
i'm wearing out
i'm reachign wits end
i'ed do anything for you
(still hi-hat, but snare 1/16's every beat, accent first note each beat, cuts off after first "anything")
i'm breaking down
i'm wearing out
i'm reachign wits end
i'ed do anything (anything)
it feels like somthings wrong
and im just to far gone
to give a damn, its just not worth it
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
("i'll miss you" repeated in backing vocals, "i'll" two counts "miss you" two counts, repeats immediatly)
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
i'll miss them all when i'm gone
but i'll miss you more than anyone
(on word "more" heavy bass/snare/ride cymbol hit, let ride ring but everything else cuts out and vocalist finishes)
despite the subject, want it to be a pretty up beat song as far as the music of it goes, simple, light, quick drum parts, happy chords, happy vocal progressions, not supposed to be a depressing sound.
this is one of my most complete peices, i've got a full drum part, but i can't play guitar (yet, working on that) so i cant write those parts. comments and critisism welcome.
pipes
