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Post by John Barnett on Feb 2, 2005 23:22:05 GMT -5
It never ends I keep trying to let go But I can't get no Break from this you know My heart breaks, my breath takes My soul makes me cry lakes And all I can see is your face in my head All I can hear are the words that you've said
chorus I can't stop this love, it makes me wanna fly But you don't feel me, and that makes me wanna cry Can't stop this heart, from loving you so bad Not having you makes me so, so sad
I remember a time, when you were all mine Everything was fine, we were sweeter than wine But then one day, you up and walked away Leaving me to decay, nothing left to say You said it'd be okay, this was only delay But now you're gone away, and I'm left in disarray
You turned your back, left my heart black Set me out in the cold, so bold And everyday since I have dreamed of you Praying for a sweet reunion
repeat chorus
Day after day, night after night I can't look at you without freezing in fright Week after week, month after month You must know my love will never be done
repeat chorus(2x)
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Feb 3, 2005 23:16:48 GMT -5
I know it's kinda lame and has been said before, but this rocks. Nice flow and wording- the rhythm is felt and heard, if you can understand that. Anyway, Fantastically written.
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2005 16:02:47 GMT -5
Thank u, I was pleased with this work more so than some of my other recent writes.
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Post by pipes on Mar 8, 2005 23:39:42 GMT -5
it does sound good but i can't fit ti to a style in my head... what kinda music would you say this was? whatever it is it does flow well, but i'm not really diggin the "aaaa" rhyming in the middle verse. it could sound good if sung right i guess...
pipes
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