Tainted wings of an angel

[Alex'z Death Chic]

After a long time, I'm here again!!!
For a guy who's been very special to me. I am sorry for hurting you.

Thy heart, its bleeding
and I seek to repent
for having to hurt
someone so heavensent

hear my pleas like a song to your ear
like a melody from your past
welcome them into your heart
to free my guilt at last

Please I beg of you
to just forgive and forget
because I admit
I did something I now regret

And now I thank you
for the smiles you gave to me
for the eternal memories
and in my heart, you'll always be...

[amelie]

touchingly written. guilt is such a corrosive emotion, but i thought your poem came across as honest and well expressed

[Alex'z Death Chic]

Thanks melis... Your reply really means so much to me... (I worship you) I really do... I envy your talent...lol... I sound like a crazed fanatic/stalker... haha...

[amelie]

aww love. thats very sweet, but we all have our different styles, and i love your sense of rythmn,. your words fow very easily and you rhyme with a nice delicate touch. i envy you in this . i think we have a mutual admiration society lol