Sew The Wounds

[DeadByMorning]

This is soon to be put to guitar

Ripping into old scars
I'm making myself bleed
Bleed myself dry
So I don't have to think
Of how you make me feel
How you affect me.
I'm open and I'm bleeding
In front of you
But you see nothing
You don't see anything,
Not that this matters.
I only wanted a kiss
I only wanted your love
Now my soul is exposed
Now my heart is an open wound
Festering for anyone to see
Shattering under the scars and wounds
Help me to fill the hole.
I'm open and I'm bleeding
In front of you
But you see nothing
You don't see anything,
Not that this matters.
I need someone to help me sew
Myself back up
Bring me back together
Heal these wounds,
They've been open for way too long,
I've been bleeding for far too long.
I'm open and I'm bleeding
In front of you
But you see nothing
You don't see anything,
Not that this matters.
I need you
Your touch, your kiss
Someone to close up my wounds
Scar them over
Make me forget the reason
Make me forget...

[beginswithKendsinG]

This is pretty good. I can imagine how this sounds. The wording isn't too bad either. It realy does flow. Not too shabby mate keep it up.

[::..::FoX::..::]

This does have a great flow, good job!