Help to improve? Collaboration? Opinions?

[mehtadone]

Hi guys,

I have been using Starlitecafe to post for quite a while now and just discovered this forum.

I just bought a 4-track recorder and have recorded some of the songs.

I am not a good guitarist or a good singer, but people seem to like my songs.

I was wondering if you had any comments. Or if anyone would like record some of my songs again, that would be brilliant. No strings attached. Use them as much as you want, but I would just like to hear them. (And maybe get a little mention if you do.)

Check them out here
www.chiragmehta.co.uk/fun/mymusic.html

[X x K e l Z x X]

I like those, yeah!

[John Barnett]

Can't get them to play.

[mehtadone]

Sorry about that. I don't know why you can't get them to play.

Here is a direct link:
www.soundclick.com.nyud.net:8090/pro/default.cfm?BandID=269884&content=music

Hope you have better luck .

Thanks for listening!!!

[T.J. Barber]

Well, I have to say, I have heard worse. I like them actually. There was a few notes in there that sounded a little off key but, hey, thier your songs so, they should sound your way. Good job with those...

TJ