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Post by haggardlilelf on Jun 30, 2004 18:21:55 GMT -5
I was inspired by you, And wrote great lyrics. But you read through, And didnt think for a minute That they were sonnets for you. Your voice was my lullaby Your memory kept me awake My desire for your lips on mine, Was more than I could take. But you f*cked it up you dumbass c*nt. When I said how I felt, You said quite blunt, I should eat sh*t and die Thus making me cry. I wish I could hate you, And wish you would die, But youd see none of these thoughts, If you looked in my eyes. Id look back, With tears of joy And wish you would hold me, Because I fell in love with a boy.
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Seth
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Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Jul 17, 2004 16:41:58 GMT -5
Beautiful, painful and full of saddened anger. Lovely written, the ending was wonderful and nice flow.
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Post by Mikepoet on Jul 25, 2004 17:54:41 GMT -5
Ditto to everything Seth said.
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