I Wish It Would Have Been

[haggardlilelf]

I wish it would have been
Maybe I wouldn't be looking back on the end
A sadness that enraptures me
Holds me close and just wont let me breathe
I wish it would have been

Romeo and Juliet
Lovers since the day they met
Now theyre thinking
If it would have been
The saddest words in history
Romeo was too blind to see
That Juliet
Was faking her death
And when they gave their lives
In fear of life without love
They lost what could
Could have been

(chorus)
What could have been
Could change your life
Take away some sacrifice
Some thoughts at night
Wishes
That it could have been

A beautiful teenage girl
Living in her own cold world
Decided her life wasnt good enough
At the funeral family cried
Gathered together to say goodbye
They all had the same wishful thought
I wish it could
Could have been

(chorus)

(Bridge)
Lovers can change their paths
Friends can bring forth a laugh
A new age youth can make a difference
Just have to put up enough resistance
With too much thought you can lose your nerve
And when you lose your nerve
You'll start to think
I wish it could have been

(Chorus)

[_black phoenix_]

Extraordinary work! This really kicks ass, dear poet. The rhymes in this piece are just so natural.

I am suprised that there are no other replies for this work of art.. It's just sitting here untouched. So sad.

[Mikepoet]

I agree with Morgan, again I hear Metal.

[X x K e l Z x X]

Great song write! Keep it up elf!