Fading

[alostandbrokensoul]

So many sweet beginnings
where love then went wrong
with so many bitter endings
where happiness didnt belong.
So many hearts turned to stone
from losing their loved ones
to many souls not wanting to be alone
Wishing then they had a gun.
So many sweet beginnings
come to a starteling stop
So many heart wrenching endings
so many tears that drop.
So many hearts torn to pieces
that are to never ment to mend
living with the pain that never ceases
to die would be a god send.
So many unhappy faces
plastered on the wall
not knowing their true places
hoplessly wanting to fall.
So many sweet beginnings
that never seem to go right
the bitterness of loves ending
fading out of sight.

[angel]

aaaaaah this is so sad. You have an awesome ending. I find that endings are the most difficult in a poem, and yours a great.

[pencinks]

can almost feel my gut wrenching at love with the lines you wove here...must've been that "irony" is indeed an abundant mineral here on earth... ;D

[Seth]

Yes, the endings are the hardest part and you've written it perfectly. Terrific ending and excellent poem.
Wonderfully done.