the wall

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

indelible lines were drawn
long before you said hello
gale force winds carry
whispered confessions
borne out of loneliness

invisible to everyone else
stands this wall, stupendous
to tease us with our wants
while we stay with our needs
never looking away
from what could have been

impossible to scale
extremely grotesque
it stands unwavering
the truth excruciating
its presence indisputable
call it what you want

it is undeniably right

[angel]

This poem intrigues me...but I need a translation, I did not quite grasp it.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

invisible,
thanks for letting me know you don't quite understand it...
it's in reference to meeting someone absolutely fantastic, nearly perfect. but knowing that you will never, nor can you ever...
it's to love lost that i barely experienced, due to lines and walls. did that make sense?
x r x

[angel]

ok now it makes sense. Thanx I like it