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Post by QueenofDarkness on Feb 22, 2005 15:20:45 GMT -5
This probably won't make sense to many of you but maybe it'll hit ya sooner or later.
Wish I could dance in the rain Drop the antidepressants down the drain Maybe go a little insane I want people to remember my name I want to get my heart broken Relive the memory Take a lesson for a token Because this strange girl is free Nothing is wrong with me Everything is fine that I can see I'm the person no one thought I could be Different......but me. Walking as a stranger With only a smile I feel no danger Then again.....I have another mile Don't get me wrong I have a happy song It won't be long Before I prove your opinions wrong I live for a dream Behind the scene Torn from the seams I have a silent scream Take a cold shower Clear your mind No need to scour I know I feel like I'm dead Our views never the same Cameras in faces I step out of range Can't sleep at night I walk the halls How can you be right When everything is wrong I walk back to my four walls I'm going to dance in the rain Throw the pills down the drain Maybe I'll go insane Possibly you'll remember my name.
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Post by NeverMore on Feb 23, 2005 2:34:40 GMT -5
Talk about words understood! WOW! Mind you, last time I looked I was not a girl *L* But I sure have thought so much similar more then a few times. And if the antidepressant part is you, never give up the thought of being away from them. A few years ago, after 15 years on those pain in the ass things, I was able to leave them behind with the right help. It was like quitting a drug addiction, only better *S* But only do it the right way.
This is one special and awsome write! Thank you for posting it!
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 1, 2005 19:52:32 GMT -5
This is excellent Queen, great to read, very well written, keep it up!
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Post by faithmairee on Apr 1, 2005 23:16:58 GMT -5
a deeply moving poem, well written with a powerful delivery...i thought it was great!
faith
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 2, 2005 14:40:43 GMT -5
I agree with Faith. It was delivered very powerfully. It's flow and rhythym we're great. Keep up the good work Jeana.
TJ
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Post by QueenofDarkness on Apr 7, 2005 11:57:05 GMT -5
Thanks guys. I actually wrote this 5 years ago. I was just afraid no one would understand it.
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