Prayer on My Knees

[QueenofDarkness]

The church walls surround me
The holy water on my hands
A tear on my cheek as I hit my knees
A savior in demand
I cry to heaven
Here in my misery
For my sin
Set my soul free
An angel's marble face stares back at me
Fallen from grace
Help me please
Don't judge so harshly
I'm on my knees
You have my soul eternally
You are the only one
Who knows truthfully of my faith
My soul shows
I keep your words safe with me always
Please don't take the best part of me
The voice of a girl is calling
Tears in her eyes
As she falls to her knees
Catch her...
She's falling...
Catch me.

[John Barnett]

I love this, the imagery is great, the whole piece is awesome....great work! Excellent!

[T.J. Barber]

I agree with John. I feel as if the image this poem gives off is something of turmoil and true distress. I also feel a great deal of personal pain in this write and I hope things will change for you soon..

TJ

[QueenofDarkness]

Thank you both for the words of encouragement. Yes there was a great deal feeling put into this piece. I hope to post some new poetry on here very soon. I've been working on some.