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Post by pencinks on Jun 14, 2004 6:53:50 GMT -5
So long thine inspired wonder and goodnight...for you were a haunting dream, sleepy snore to the realm of those loved and loving...
Kept a hideous pace in my heart, too many a word that fluttered and cheesy...for the wee hours have spoken I must sleep...
saying you must "try loving and be corny!"
Hears a foolish cry no more of silence that lured me stupid in a corner and unspoken...now I can only see the end of it for tomorrow you were already leaving... sigh, and yeah, leaving...
So long thine dreamt wonder , one that've kept long and unopened...for you've kept a pace in my heart like a million love songs unsung...
aghast and I awake this morning, misty and so my eyes...for thinking I've loved you though poignantly silent...
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Post by Mikepoet on Jun 14, 2004 21:15:31 GMT -5
Good write.
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Post by Seth on Jun 26, 2004 20:24:38 GMT -5
I love your choice of words in this piece... Wonderfully written, the last stanza was wonderful, overall a great piece.
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