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[Nuv]

An Azure kiss from you
Would steal the moon away
In my Mind and in my Soul
You are what I live for
You are what I would die for
You make me see the world around me
In a whole new view and perspective

As I sit under the dark of the night sky
The fire burning around me
I think about life and death
Of how short it really is
What will become of me
And the people I love

I know nothing will last forever
nor does it never matter
But I live for you

Finis.

Suggestions for a Title and any Comments on this welcome


Thanks

[angel]

i'm not good with titles. This piece is awesome though, very nice job! The wording is very strong and it flows very well.

One question though:
What is Azure?

[Nuv]

Thank you
this is my first piece and im starting to feel very good about this

Azure in this case is a blueish color ^^

and thank you again


i think i may have found something Im good at ^^

[NeverMore]

My first thought was natural, I thought the name should be "Azure kiss".. but then I read it a few more times. I tried putting my feelings inside the words and to me, the name "Azure love" just sat there. Using azure with love feels clear if that makes sense. You know, the feeling when you look at the color azure while thinking of the one you love? I ramble perhaps? But it is what I felt when I read this...

as for "thinking" you found something you are good at.. don't think it, KNOW it! You do this very very well... very awsome write! I love it when a poem touches me just from reading it

[Nuv]

Thank you.

^.^

so Azure Love..?
I like it....

im not sure yet... so ill think about it some more


What makes it so good to you..?
thats what I want to know

[NeverMore]

I think what makes it so good to me is that there seems to be feelings between the words. The feelings for me, make me wish someone had those kinds of words for me one day. I have heard many nice things said to me in life, but the way you worded this just made it feel different and deeper then just words.