unwritten
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Post by unwritten on Jun 6, 2004 23:33:49 GMT -5
I always awake in darkness And stumbling I yell for you Bumping into several obstacles On my search to find you Already awake, you’ve lighted the way Set guides in my dark hallways But I keep finding all the wrong doors This hallway is full of wrong turns Wrong choices and misguided truths Rooms filled to the bursting with empty promises And so many plastic people its turning my head For the Son has not yet shone through my windows But His bright promise lights the horizon For early morning always find me in darkness But I have stopped looking for the lies No longer will I enter doors of disguise But try and follow your lighted signs I have no use for artificial light The Son will light my heart And He’s fire will keep me from going blind
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Post by angel on Jun 9, 2004 22:38:08 GMT -5
this piece is truly amazing...superb job...absolutely heart lifting....I love it!
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Post by sterling06 on Jun 19, 2004 15:13:33 GMT -5
great write, yeilding the presence of jesus and keeping him alive though your thoughts. i enjoyed the last two lines. (The Son will light my heart And He’s fire will keep me from going blind ). very uplifting write.
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Post by Mikepoet on Jul 24, 2004 21:51:26 GMT -5
This was a well written way of saying Christianity is the way to true happiness in life or that is what I gathered. Bravo..
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