NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on May 15, 2004 1:04:07 GMT -5
(please, if it suits you, replace the deity reference with what you feel is right, I believe, this would fit for any faith *S*)
how many times in a persons life will they look up to see the end and where do they go to rest when resting is all that is left
Just to find when they reach the gate A hand from behind gently nudges saying, "love has changed it's mind, love has a duty yet for your life."
There is peace and tranquility on the other side testing and turmoil spread wide on this side death bows to the grips of lasting love to return this one to a place to better serve
used and abused by love wanting the end sent back into the arms of another needy one what do they want of me this one cries did I not just die for a love untrue
Then came a voice from where who knows saying this love is here to save you this time this is your turn for forever love she will hold you through and love you long
So hear my prayer oh goddess mine I thank you for the challenge you send and goddess mine, for her true love to weather me through the nights
my challenge is clear now, to show the mighty to teach and nurture the weak of life That your truth and power will alone judge in the end
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Post by angel on Jun 2, 2004 23:18:04 GMT -5
it makes me wonder what inspired you to write that, because that is not always something we think on a daily basis. I like it
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Post by Mikepoet on Jul 22, 2004 19:54:59 GMT -5
Another powerful write..I am sure that the depth that you feel emotion would make a lovers heart soar..Keep writing sir..
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