Mac
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Post by Mac on Apr 30, 2004 17:53:03 GMT -5
There is a place where the dirt-road ends abruptly changes to black highway asphalt, where some daffodils grow yellow and white, not that passersby would notice. Let us leave this crossroad behind, turn right where the dirt blows red and the road winds and bends, up the hill, past the old graveyard where the plastic flowers grow.
To the place I’ve always had in my head down by the old creek where the willows still grow. To the place I knew before I lost the way.
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Post by PoeticWarfare on May 1, 2004 17:31:21 GMT -5
excellent word usuage Mac
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on May 4, 2004 12:46:11 GMT -5
I agree, the words are wonderful
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Post by Mikepoet on May 4, 2004 12:58:31 GMT -5
I have read this one many times Mac and will read it many times more.
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Post by John Barnett on May 5, 2004 16:06:00 GMT -5
Nice work Mac, I really liked this, welcome to Poet Club
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