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purity
Apr 28, 2004 22:40:10 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 22:40:10 GMT -5
your purity, my obsession
strips me of all i've come to know
your purity, my addiction
my paltry emulation
so pious and prude
your purity, my affliction
sees me naked and bound
for the squalid to see
their lecherous eyes
deprived and wretched
so as they turn
to steal a glimpse
of your purity, my impulsion
they become all too conscious
of human sin
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purity
Apr 29, 2004 18:49:49 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Apr 29, 2004 18:49:49 GMT -5
Great write Charl1, welcome to Poet Club!
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purity
Apr 29, 2004 19:13:00 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 29, 2004 19:13:00 GMT -5
thanks!
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purity
Apr 30, 2004 14:01:39 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on Apr 30, 2004 14:01:39 GMT -5
;D
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
Posts: 330
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purity
May 1, 2004 15:30:12 GMT -5
Post by amberputis on May 1, 2004 15:30:12 GMT -5
hey nice job, im diggin this 1
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purity
May 2, 2004 5:07:15 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 2, 2004 5:07:15 GMT -5
amber, mike,
thank you both.
rinna
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purity
Jul 25, 2004 8:16:30 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jul 25, 2004 8:16:30 GMT -5
** i have re-written this, i'm much happier with this edit**
x r x
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purity
Nov 28, 2004 18:42:41 GMT -5
Post by nevadasky on Nov 28, 2004 18:42:41 GMT -5
rinna,
great write, very passionate and image filled.
bravo!
nevadasky
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purity
Nov 29, 2004 7:03:11 GMT -5
Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Nov 29, 2004 7:03:11 GMT -5
Very well, I like
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