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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 19, 2004 18:12:58 GMT -5
I pray to the North
Pray to the South
Pray to the East
Pray to the West
Pray to God almighty
for her luck to go it's best
Prey to all the seasons
Spring Winter Summer Fall
again I pray to the God that is
the Our Father says it all
my father your father whose father.
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 20, 2004 0:03:16 GMT -5
wonderful piece...the only thing is i think you mean PRAY not PREY...there is a world of difference in meaning....but other than that it's wonderful...good job!
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 20, 2004 8:56:45 GMT -5
Did'nt someone just tell me that Hawkette? I am embarresed.
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 20, 2004 15:51:51 GMT -5
Great write Mike, but you missed one more "prey"...in "Prey to all the seasons"...sorry dude, just thought I'd show you the last one...great write though
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Post by KG on Apr 20, 2004 17:58:49 GMT -5
Alright everybody get off his back.  Great job mike! You got some real talent.  |
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 22, 2004 20:09:31 GMT -5
You're right, Mike does have talent.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 22, 2004 20:11:39 GMT -5
Great Job Mike. I enjoyed this piece. It was heartfelt and truly decisive. I really liked it's feel and tone. Good job, Tj
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 26, 2004 15:17:02 GMT -5
Thanks all. I fixed it and will mess up again. Just tell me when I do. Thanks KG you are a cool one and I love your site. This site here is a good one as well. I am glad to be a member of both. This is a prayer I wrote and find it actualy helps. Say it when you go fishing or whenever Mother Nature could help you with something.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 21:22:54 GMT -5
i've always liked this one mike. really sweet and optimistic.
x rinna x
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Post by Mikepoet on May 4, 2004 12:00:36 GMT -5
Thanks rinna, your always a pleasure.
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