Sanctum of Serenity

X x K e l Z x X
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Sanctum of Serenity Apr 6, 2004 18:37:33 GMT -5

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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 6, 2004 18:37:33 GMT -5

My soul is a star in your deep sky
So many times I wonder why
My heart cries out for a purpose now
And I hear your voice so loud
My ears tremble when you speak
My spirit flows and my knees go weak
I look to you for all the answers
I look to you for direction
My vessel is both torn and weathered
But I know I'm gonna be better
And you, will take me to a place
Where I am centered and complete
You fulfill my needs
And I am embraced by you
And I am taken unto
A sanctum of serenity

~~KelZ~~

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bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Sanctum of Serenity Apr 7, 2004 2:33:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 7, 2004 2:33:54 GMT -5 beautiful piece ....i really enjoyed this piece a ton...great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	Sanctum of Serenity Apr 7, 2004 11:54:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Apr 7, 2004 11:54:32 GMT -5 Yes, this is a very beautifully written spiritual poem with lots of depth, great work Kelz.
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::..::FoX::..:: Poet Laureate Do you like my acid roc? Posts: 741	Sanctum of Serenity Apr 10, 2004 16:19:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 10, 2004 16:19:12 GMT -5 This is beautiful Kelly, nice write.
	Scott F. Chandler Record Producer @ Acid Roc Records Recording Artist @ Acid Roc Records Perhaps next I'll be a Grammy winner!

X x K e l Z x X Chapter Leader Just Me Posts: 1,035	Sanctum of Serenity Apr 10, 2004 16:25:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 10, 2004 16:25:17 GMT -5 Thank you all
	~~KelZ~~ Z e p h y r Poet Club Administrative Assistant

Sanctum of Serenity

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 6, 2004 18:37:33 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 7, 2004 2:33:54 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on Apr 7, 2004 11:54:32 GMT -5

Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 10, 2004 16:19:12 GMT -5

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 10, 2004 16:25:17 GMT -5