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Peace Ritual Mar 2, 2004 16:14:36 GMT -5

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Post by kemleth on Mar 2, 2004 16:14:36 GMT -5

I close my eyes
To peel away from this skin
one more time
to see a world I can't exist in

all the lights
reminds me of both of you
a small sphere
filled with the color blue

I fall right back inside myself
I feel liberated again
My fault, for not grounding myself
And now, all things are phasic

back and forth, I wont stop shifting
in and out, slowly the feelings lifting

recentered and captivated
Daath lays in the tandam
hopefull with enticipation
what the middle pillar has always granted

kemleth Guest	Peace Ritual Mar 2, 2004 16:16:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by kemleth on Mar 2, 2004 16:16:33 GMT -5 There, I feel better, and am ready to start posting again! I thought it would take me awhile but I was able to recenter rather quickly. I'm feeling pretty good! So off I go!

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Peace Ritual Mar 2, 2004 21:59:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 2, 2004 21:59:37 GMT -5 hey! whats up! nice job on this one! like i told you, you really have talent. i LOVED the first stanza! nice job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Peace Ritual Mar 3, 2004 3:59:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Mar 3, 2004 3:59:08 GMT -5 I agree, there is some fine writing in your poem and a great deal of talent which you can't buy. regards Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	Peace Ritual Mar 4, 2004 0:55:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Mar 4, 2004 0:55:25 GMT -5 I share the same mindset of review as Melissa and Richards reviews! ;D

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Peace Ritual Mar 7, 2004 12:27:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Mar 7, 2004 12:27:23 GMT -5 good job here
	Amber

X x K e l Z x X Chapter Leader Just Me Posts: 1,035	Peace Ritual Mar 27, 2004 13:10:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 27, 2004 13:10:03 GMT -5 Great piece here Kemleth, very spiritual.
	~~KelZ~~ Z e p h y r Poet Club Administrative Assistant

Post by kemleth on Mar 2, 2004 16:14:36 GMT -5

Post by kemleth on Mar 2, 2004 16:16:33 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 2, 2004 21:59:37 GMT -5

Post by richie on Mar 3, 2004 3:59:08 GMT -5

Post by JosephScottMorris on Mar 4, 2004 0:55:25 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Mar 7, 2004 12:27:23 GMT -5

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 27, 2004 13:10:03 GMT -5