Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
Posts: 124
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Post by Wolf on Feb 23, 2004 13:40:12 GMT -5
Author's note: Sometimes, my mind goes to very strange places (as you've no doubt noticed)...
The Source
Void was all--deep, black, suffocating
null space/null time/null dimension,
for continuum was naught;
the matrix of space unborn...
All was void--no matter was,
to warp space, give birth to time;
no energy was, to wind infinity to entropy;
naught was,
for void was null absolute...
Void was presence, and presence was;
sentience absolute was void--
Presence spoke, and presence was word;
continuum/space/time warped and was matrix,
and matrix was dimension,
for word was photon, and
photon was particle/light;
and the light was good...
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, April 26, 1974
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 23, 2004 19:31:07 GMT -5
I admire you. You have such strong, meaningful, incredible pieces! Letting your mind wander can leave you with some of the best discoveries known to man kind, i love letting my mind explore!
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 1:13:17 GMT -5
awesome poem...i really enjoyed this one...great job!
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Post by richie on Feb 24, 2004 4:29:07 GMT -5
I agree with the others intresting work very poetic good style.
regards Richie.
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 25, 2004 21:19:25 GMT -5
This kind of reminds me of a poem I wrote a while back. It wasn't as good as this but still. Anyway, I love the line, "the matrix of space unborn..."
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 26, 2004 15:57:10 GMT -5
Indeed an interesting read, This is great writing! ;DJoe
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Mar 8, 2004 19:41:19 GMT -5
this was very good, I enjoyed reading it over and over again.
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