eleventh

[pencinks]

You who, even the raindrops and
thunderstorms can't
stop it that I clumsily grin,
Sojourn, whilst I head to it
and the evening's rush and jampacked,
nor can i faze a thought ...and this...

A thought of you smiling ...erstwhile
the years haven't erased that,
nor your pretty face can still startle me back , hesitating ,
still , am I in a state of dreaming?

But no, awhile me and I won't wanted it
to take away this thought
till I be sleeping tonight,
chuckling still while the music may
stir it away and this tableful mess
may lead it agone... still a thought...

A thought of you smiling...
while the crowd chromes my sight
and suddenly you I've seen and alone, I waved at...
one may wonder and a song
can hit right through and take that...
what good is a heart..uh-huh!

Still, stupid that was, hesitating....
for just a moment to let go and pass...

[Seth]

This piece really and truly reminds me so much of my cousin... I very much enjoyed this.

[Eclipse]

i like your flow in this piece. it goes very smoothly. a lovely write.

[pencinks]

thanks...i can only sigh at this though.., goes with the saying when vehicular traffic coupled with moonsoon rains suddenly hits you memories of someone right in the face... uh , but the girl was lovely alright!

[Alex'z Death Chic]

this was good... lemme guess... you're the guy from friendster right?

[pencinks]

yup I am