freestyled poem ;)

[GPRacer]

did this to another song beat

Someone cuts me down
I just turn around
I don’t live for them
You shoulda seen him
All the disgrace
Him and his buddy’s face
Just cuz I did the right thing
Didn’t start a ring*
So what if I don’t have the bling
I don’t live for him
He can try to pull my down
I’m not near his degree
I wish they wouldn’t talk that way to me
But I could handle that every night
Even if he did start a fight
Better to be punished for what’s right
They think they’re tuff
Think they’re cool
Try to start stuff with kids at school
You know who I’m talkin about
The ones that always pout
Always gotta get upset
Mess with someone they ain’t even met
Even though I could handle myself
I’m not that type
So what’s all tha hype?
Get over it we know tha better man in this case
Just see his face
I’m happy as could be if I didn’t have any sin
Worriless about what I coulda been
If they gotta lie and be cool
So let’em be
Only thing is to pray
Show God to’em some kinda way

[bloodredtears]

good poem...i didn't see how it tied in to spirituality until the very end of the poem, so i was trying to find a hidden meaning the entire time i was reading...it all fit at the end...great job!

[X x K e l Z x X]

I agree with Kris, the meaning at the end was good. Nice write.