Todd
Novice
What if the Hokey Pokey really is what it's all about? D'OH!
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Post by Todd on Jan 10, 2004 14:42:46 GMT -5
Flash of light that split the sky, illuminated Heaven a couple of seconds. That mortal eye could glimpse the wonder. In the night,this is so, I've seen lightning,but one bolt, that divided darkness,shone light beyond the sky, provided a glimpse unto my eyes, mind and soul, that Heaven is so. The Lords home,this is true, will dwell on earth with me and you. So is written: "Thy kingdom come,thy will be done, on earth as it is in Heaven"
Todd J.Caudill
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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 10, 2004 23:53:10 GMT -5
very interesting...i liked the last two lines especially because they tied the piece together so well!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 6, 2004 0:01:25 GMT -5
I agree with tears. The last two lines pulled the poem together very well. Nice write.
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Post by richie on Feb 19, 2004 7:43:09 GMT -5
another good piece Todd, you are progresing into a fine writer. regards Richie.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 14:43:50 GMT -5
Wonderful write again Todd, you have a knack for poems of spiritual inspiration.
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