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Post by John Barnett on Oct 6, 2004 23:00:37 GMT -5
Tell me things are fine
Let me read between the line
Let me fall victim to the signs
I am paralyzed by time
My soul treats me to another cry
A word teaches me another lie
There's no time to be shy
'Cause the world here is about to die
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Post by beginswithKendsinG on Oct 7, 2004 14:13:40 GMT -5
Now this is good. I have been missin out. I guess all the practice everyone has been puttin in is payin off.  Great Job KG |
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Post by T.J. Barber on Oct 12, 2004 14:20:03 GMT -5
Great job John...I hate I missed this one. I should have replied sooner...
Great write,
Tj
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Oct 18, 2004 2:18:48 GMT -5
My soul treats me to another cry
A word teaches me another lie
john, this is awesome. that hit me like a tonne of bricks. i'm sorry i didn't get to this sooner - wow!
rinna
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Oct 19, 2004 16:46:52 GMT -5
Well done John
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Mwalvbk
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I came from the fire, now I'm here to burn
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Post by Mwalvbk on Nov 29, 2004 16:05:38 GMT -5
Short, to the point, very good altogether.
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