The End.

[alostandbrokensoul]

I loved you
and I thought you loved me too.
but i guess deep down
we knew it wasnt true
because of all the pain you had given
into my heart
a stake was driven
deeper and deeper
into my soul
because I loved you
I had to pay the toll
I cry with tears of red
no longer am I alive
but dead instead.
you gave me your heart
on that sunny day
and as I stood in the rain
you took it away
along with my heart
did yours go
I fall to the ground
with that final blow.

[Mikepoet]

I like this. I hope you find the true course of this love.

[angel]

Wow...the words are there so intensly that I really feel your pain. Everyone goes through this at some point of their lives...and it sucks...it really does