NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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The box
May 24, 2004 19:43:41 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 24, 2004 19:43:41 GMT -5
I put away your letters took away the pictures locked away the memories of that which haunts my soul
Closed the door on wishes turned off the dim lights put a padlock on my heart turned the tepeture down low
My words have all meant nothing used like an old newspaper your wants and your desires rule all that you are
Where I thought I mattered shows holes in the floor nothing left to stand on but broken promises of faith
now set in the back of the darkest closet here sits a box of foolish memories of trust and love of you
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The box
May 28, 2004 19:46:12 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on May 28, 2004 19:46:12 GMT -5
You are so well worded. I have often wondered how a sensitive fellow like one of us poets can keep having our hearts broken when Ladies proclaim to need a sensitive man in their lives. I saw myself in reading this.
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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The box
May 28, 2004 20:50:32 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 28, 2004 20:50:32 GMT -5
Trouble is I guess that ............ hmm..... I do not know *S*... I just wish I could find a sensative woman.. perhaps one day.. no offense meant ladies *S*
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imaginary goddess #5
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shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality.
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The box
Jun 10, 2004 18:59:30 GMT -5
Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Jun 10, 2004 18:59:30 GMT -5
this is a very wellworded and truly lovely poem. i loved these lines: Closed the door on wishes turned off the dim lights put a padlock on my heart as for the sensitivity comments: my main problem is finding a guy who actually likes me more than a friend. wish i could find one like you guys *wink wink* hugs! -- lianna --
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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The box
Jul 7, 2004 22:21:50 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Jul 7, 2004 22:21:50 GMT -5
I am sure you will find him once you are not looking for him *S8 doesn't it always seem to be that way?
Thank you for the comments people, you inspire me *S*
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