Mobious
Novice
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Post by Mobious on May 23, 2004 22:15:30 GMT -5
Watching Your Heart.
Ever feel like your heart was ripped out¿ Tis an exhilerating feeling, To feel dead but alive, Terribly beautiful doest thou sounds heard, Silence and talking in one moment, And what to do, But feel yourself fall into the sky, Not knowing which cloud to hit, And then it is gone, Or possibly you, Maybe hold your hands out, And catch yourself and heart, And watch death with life.
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Post by Mikepoet on May 28, 2004 19:35:45 GMT -5
Well written, a bit morbid it seems. Sometimes love does that to me too. A good read.
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on May 31, 2004 19:06:39 GMT -5
Ooh, Too awesome! The title is really cool as well. Truly enjoyed this, love the flow and simply the whole piece. Fantastic write.
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Jun 7, 2004 15:36:03 GMT -5
Silence and talking in one moment
i love the line. cool piece.
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