a set of 4 Katuna's

PoeticWarfare
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a set of 4 Katuna's May 1, 2004 18:26:25 GMT -5

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Post by PoeticWarfare on May 1, 2004 18:26:25 GMT -5

I wrote the 4 of these durning my stint as TPS...hope you enjoy

No More Pain

Whiper it to me
Mention something, anything
I wish to feel no more pain

Cut

Slit my wrist today
Severing my bond to you
My blood spilling forever

Release

Wide-eyed and hopeful
Over the rainbow I to find
A release from all I knew

No one left

Broken flesh on glass
Monotone breath vanishing
No one left to hear you scream

Hunter Virtuoso Fallen Angel Posts: 287	a set of 4 Katuna's May 2, 2004 3:34:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hunter on May 2, 2004 3:34:27 GMT -5 Wow.
	Beneath this mask of sparkling words, I am nothing. So forgive me for raising your hopes.

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	a set of 4 Katuna's May 4, 2004 11:39:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 11:39:13 GMT -5 i like these alot...all four say a lot in such a short length...great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Mikepoet Virtuoso Posts: 487	a set of 4 Katuna's May 4, 2004 12:03:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mikepoet on May 4, 2004 12:03:05 GMT -5 I agree, these are powerful pieces.

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	a set of 4 Katuna's May 4, 2004 18:26:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on May 4, 2004 18:26:54 GMT -5 I agree very powerful piece. Keep it up Jason....
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

Horn Novice Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us Posts: 66	a set of 4 Katuna's May 4, 2004 18:32:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Horn on May 4, 2004 18:32:31 GMT -5 yes, the point was strongly made with various images you presented, but not forced upon the reader. I like it, good job!
	Last Edit: May 4, 2004 18:32:52 GMT -5 by Horn "The mind is a prison which torments until the day you die. One can only escape this meaningless life by embracing the eternal dreamless sleep that we call death." -Me

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	a set of 4 Katuna's May 5, 2004 15:17:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on May 5, 2004 15:17:39 GMT -5 Interesting format and style, very good Jason.
	Jwalaeb

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	a set of 4 Katuna's May 18, 2004 22:01:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on May 18, 2004 22:01:11 GMT -5 These four seem related in some way. I like them. They're elegantly written and wonderfully expressed.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

a set of 4 Katuna's

Post by PoeticWarfare on May 1, 2004 18:26:25 GMT -5

Post by Hunter on May 2, 2004 3:34:27 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 11:39:13 GMT -5

Post by Mikepoet on May 4, 2004 12:03:05 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on May 4, 2004 18:26:54 GMT -5

Post by Horn on May 4, 2004 18:32:31 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on May 5, 2004 15:17:39 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on May 18, 2004 22:01:11 GMT -5