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Post by Mikepoet on May 1, 2004 9:56:19 GMT -5
Forever together entwined
is true love written in rhymes.
It’s present essence illuminates
as romance softly shines.
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on May 2, 2004 3:36:08 GMT -5
Mike, you're very good at this.
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Post by Mikepoet on May 3, 2004 17:10:47 GMT -5
Thank you ;DI wrote this one specificly for the forum you Mod. rather than take four line pieces of my older stuff. I am glad you like.
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Post by SilverEyes on May 18, 2004 21:41:31 GMT -5
I really don't know what to say about this. It's such a wonderful piece. I love it's fluidity and the imagery of it all.
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Post by Mikepoet on May 29, 2004 14:38:22 GMT -5
Thank you so much. I will most likly try to write more for this forum, I like these short poems. So much needs to be said in a few words and perhaps it will better my poetry to come to this forum more often.
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